Thursday, May 20, 2010

The Rain Storm

Boom! went the thunder. Splatter splash went the rain.

There was a splash and a crash.

And I heard a boom in my room!!!!!!!!!!!!

4 comments:

Nana said...

Good job! And I enjoyed your review of Farmer Boy.

Eclectic Homeschooling said...

thank you I will put instructions on my blog time to time

Ms. Tatiana @ World Star Academy said...

Thank you for submitting this to the Homeschooled Kids Carnival! It is up now at:

http://www.worldstaracademy.com/2010/05/welcome-to-carnival.html

I really like how the words sound in what you wrote! Good work!

Annaxandria said...

Love the post. It's really good. I also love your rain words.